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Oh Dear - Created on 12th October 2012 by Thunder
This is an open story, so here is the story so far:

Oh Dear, she said
As if it was enough
Enough to fill an ocean
An ocean full of stuff

But it wasn't as he bled
It was hard to be tough
As it played out this gruesome scene
He couldn't keep up his uneasy bluff

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